Friday, May 6, 2016
Sunday, May 1, 2016
Production Report 14b
I haven't exactly produced much content yet and what I have is pretty scattered, so I'll update this post tomorrow with some wonderful draft material!
Production Report 14a
I haven't exactly produced much content yet and what I have is pretty scattered, so I'll update this post tomorrow with some wonderful draft material!
Peer Review for Eren Arbac
I reviewed Eren Arbac's content outline that I think can be found here. I left him a pretty specific outlining recommendation concerning his first body section.
In the outline, he seemed a little repetitive and restated the idea he had instead of explaining it, and I wanted to make sure he would be really specific and clear and provide a good explanation in the actual project. I think my recommendation definitely helps him because while it's easier to get detailed and dig into the specifics when talking about yourself, I still think having a clear idea from get-go will help. And as it stands I can't find that from his outline.
According to the Course Final Assignment Sheet, it seems we are encouraged to get specific about whatever components of our writing process we want to, but it seems that we have to focus on something and really explain it. I think my recommendation will help with him final product in achieving this goal.
I was a fan of the way he wanted to focus on how his writing improved and gear his evidence in order to support that, rather than just talk about what happened this semester on the surface. The fact that he wants to talk about how he grew as a writer more than just what his process is, that was inspiring and I'm definitely going to try to think of some way to put a spin on my project that makes the topic more important like Eren did.
In the outline, he seemed a little repetitive and restated the idea he had instead of explaining it, and I wanted to make sure he would be really specific and clear and provide a good explanation in the actual project. I think my recommendation definitely helps him because while it's easier to get detailed and dig into the specifics when talking about yourself, I still think having a clear idea from get-go will help. And as it stands I can't find that from his outline.
According to the Course Final Assignment Sheet, it seems we are encouraged to get specific about whatever components of our writing process we want to, but it seems that we have to focus on something and really explain it. I think my recommendation will help with him final product in achieving this goal.
I was a fan of the way he wanted to focus on how his writing improved and gear his evidence in order to support that, rather than just talk about what happened this semester on the surface. The fact that he wants to talk about how he grew as a writer more than just what his process is, that was inspiring and I'm definitely going to try to think of some way to put a spin on my project that makes the topic more important like Eren did.
Production Schedule for the Course Final
I made a schedule that is meant to keep me on track with this project. It's not incredibly detailed but that's because I'm doing all of my filming tomorrow so I didn't break it down to the hours and minutes when it will be done because I don't even know what I'm eating for breakfast or wearing tomorrow so how could I possibly be that prepared. I'm not about that life. But I did try to design this in a way that will be useful for me, so if you wanna check it out you'll click here.
Content Outline for the Course Final
Iiiiiiii've got a content outline for ya! Hopefully focusing on my inability to do process work will fill out enough for my video essay. If you wanna sneak a peek, you'd find my outline here.
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